Wednesday, June 15, 2011

Slice of Life Story: Oakley Creek

I don't like Oakley Creek.
I don't like it because it makes me feel sick.
The animals and the water, also the trees.
The water is brown and full of poo.
There is rubbish and bugs and eels.
I will like it more if it was clean.
We cleaned Oakley Creek but it still needs more cleaning.

-by Dash
A Slice of Life Story for Miss Martin

1 comment:

  1. Wow Joshua
    Great to see you include your thoughts and feelings about Oakley Creek.
    It would be better if people could keep it clean and help the environment.

    Miss Martin